Monday, 22 August 2011

Sam's Auckland is... poem

Auckland Is….
The outstanding, magnificent KellyTaltons with its freaky tiger sharks lurking in the deep, crystal clear, dark blue water!
The fun filled, fabulous Butterfly Creek with its colourful, beautiful butterflies soaring through the air and disappearing through the trees.
The remarkable, attractive Rainbowsend where there are exciting, speedy rides and delicious, pink candyfloss.
The incredible, humungous Chelsea Sugar factory with its sparkly, fantastic, murky, green water.
The shiny, dazzling Crystal Mountain with all its glittery, glossy, crystals.
By Sam

5 comments:

  1. well done Sam I can picture that Amazing poem right now!!!!! xx
    Lucy

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  2. Hailey b ,aleisha's sister26 August 2011 at 17:17

    wow sam that is amazing

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  3. I love your descriptive writing, Sam. Keep up the great work so that I can read some more!!

    Mrs Steel

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  4. Meg (Lucy's sister)26 October 2011 at 19:54

    Nice work Sam!!! I love how you've used descriptive language to describe all of those wonderful things in Auckland.

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  5. I love your poem Sam!
    Love Mum

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