Aotearoa is ...
Amazing brilliant Auckland that has red, fiery pohutakawa trees waving gently and catching the sunlight.
Amazing brilliant Auckland that has red, fiery pohutakawa trees waving gently and catching the sunlight.
The fantastic, exciting puzzle world in Queenstown with all its extreme puzzles and optical illusions.
The tiny but, spectacular Waiheke with its fun banana boating and shy stingrays.
Remarkable Rotorua with steamy, hot pools that looks out to the wonderful lakes and picturesque scenery.
By Sarah
Amazing language, Sarah. I liked the way I could pictue the things that you wrote about in my head. You have used adjectives effectively. Well done!!
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I agree with Mrs Steel, Sarah. Your poem is written with words - yet it is somehow so visual with the amazing way you have described the various, wonderful places in Aotearoa. Wonderful work.
ReplyDeleteWell done Sarah, you have painted a picture with words so clearly of the wonderful places we have here in Aotearoa that I can't wait to visit them!
ReplyDeleteMrs Tobin
well done sarah I loved your poem!!! :)
ReplyDeletewow Sarah cool as
ReplyDeletegood job Sarah...
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Hannah
Well done Sarah... It is a fabulous reminder of the wonderful places you have visited. Very descriptive language. I'm impressed!! Love Mum
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem Sarah. Well done!
ReplyDeletehey Sarah, you have an awesome poem there, keep up the outstanding, magnificent technique!!!
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